Angels-Symphony

This is just the beginning of my story, I've written a bundle more. I just don't want to bore you lot :smt003. So here we go. This is sort of ...

Shine bright, little baby You’re our new star, You’ll have hopes and dreams, (a)nd they’ll take you so far(.) Stay sweet, little baby Let your innocence remain(.) Take nothing to ...

Hey Kelly ^^ I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer for today. Welcome to YWS by the way. I hate to be the one mean to you when you're brand ...

Hi there! Most things here have already been picked up on, so I'll just let you know I thought this was really good. You have nice flow in writing, but ...

Hey there Shina! I really liked this and it looks like all the nitpicks have been done, but really I don't see anything wrong with this. Usually, when I review ...

*Another miserable poem... *sigh* oh well, that's the way I am. Dark and depressing :D. Please review!* Drenched in my tears, my heart drowned in pain. (don't capitalize each line ...

It’s all but some threads on the tapestry(.) (delete these unecessary words) mangled and frayed, you laid them low(.) The insignificant ones(no comma) nobody sees(,) in the dark corners where ...

I'm glad you found my advice useful xD I'm not much of a poet either, I'm more of a novelist myself (though most of the final work is not here).

Hi! I am very new to writing poetry. I usually prefer writing novels. Anyway, I came up with some random lines off the top of my head. I figure they'll ...

I'm going to try (and hopefully succeed) to get you addicted to YWS like many of the other users you see floating around all over the place. First of all, ...

My attempt at poetry once more. I hope it's alright xD I’m the person in the shadows the one that no one knows. Hidden by the darkness dressed in simple ...

I've always wanted to know my one true love. That person who will change my life. Two hearts that beat, two hearts that meet, the relationship with unspeakable power. But ...

Bananas Every morning, every evening* I am ready for a fruit that has smooth and soft skin. *I agree with June and believe you should mix this up a bit. ...

Pssh. Play doh is fun for everyone no matter what your age is! In 8th grade me and my friends were making pizzas during Algebra and people were actually jealous ...

Thanks for the reviews again. Sorry , Evi and Rose. I didn't mean to sound mean xD It's just the whole standards and rules thing for writing is one of ...