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Re: It's a slip up, but it's real.
You call me a faker, And a liar too. You say I just want attention. So my emotions aren’t real. You’re right, I do fake my emotions, I lie about ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: My frog, my prince
I kissed my frog today, To my dismay He turned into a prince. I miss his croaking, I miss his wet slimy body, I miss his constant hopping. All I ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Your Brain
I no what you think Its gonna be another boring poem About how somebody has unspoken able beauty Or just to short of a skirt But this is about your ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Before I go to sleep
In the smmer when I go to bed The sun still streaming overhead My bed becomes so small and hot With sheets and pillow in a knot, And then I ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Princess Jade
Hey Sparrow ^^ Shina here! I'll be your reviewer today ;) The idea here is really nice. Fairy tale twist indeed! I wasn't expecting her to be a tomboy xD ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Before I Go To Bed
In the summer when I go to bed The sun still streaming overhead My bed becomes so small and hot With sheets and pillow in a knot, And then I ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: As I Tango
Well, I decided earlier today that I wanted to write a poem. The universal question popped into my head: about what? So, while I was browsing (my hero website) I ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: A Memory So Vivid
The memories- Sometimes They're so vivid, I can't even tell If they're real Or a figment Of my imagination. And sometimes, I don't care. I don't care If they're real ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Beautiful Dream
Thank you for the review ^^
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Outside/Inside
I wrote this in like ten minutes, so I know it won't be that good. Reviews are greatly appreciated, and so are title suggestions. I'll fix the structure later, because ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: A Heart that Hides
Let not my heart be opened To the perils of the world, To the treachery of Romance, And to sweet, deceitful words. Let my heart be safe within me, Never ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: The Happy
Happy, happy, happy! That's the way I am, Laughing, grinning, giggles! I smile because I can! Love, love, love! That's my favorite thing, Hearts, flowers, chocolate! I swear, I could ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Lovers Bread Basket
Lovers Bread Basket Two secret lovers went down the winding street, And into the town when who did they meet? The boy’s dotting mother bread basket in hand, Who had ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Cousin Benjamin
"Cousin Benjamin is the best!" That's what my relatives said, "With charm and skill he is certainly blessed—" Those words hammered into my head I found I was at my ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Bubbly
I loved her till the day she died When I found out I sat and cried. Inside my room I stayed alone, All I did was weep and moan. And ...
Mar 1, 2009
