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Angels-Symphony

  • OOC Archive Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training

    Is this storybook full? If so, please PM me in case I lose this threadxD ~Shina

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Forgive Me

    Well, here I go again. This is my second attempt at poetry. Enjoy! :D --- You’ll have to forgive me, for borrowing your heart. But give me a second, to ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I miss you

    Hey Spike ^^ Shina here ;) I'll be your reviewer for today. Okay, well the overall point of this poem is a cliche, but something about it is fresh. I ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Betrayer Betrayed

    Hey Spike ^^ Shina here once again, and I'm actually not disappointed this time. This was better than my original expectations. This poem is blunt. It's brief and quick just ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The touch of a vampire

    Hey Spike! Shina here again ;) I'm reviewing another one of poems since I've already started to attack your portfolio. You said you write like me, so I want to ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A dead man's last wish

    Oh god, I wannna go back to Earth. For I wanna wipe away the tears, From the eyes of little children. Oh god I wanna go back to Earth. For ...

    Mar 5, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Can't Fly

    NOTE: "~" this is a long extended note. You broke my heart; you made me cry. You ripped my wings so I can't fly. I trusted you to love me ...

    Mar 3, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: String Cheese

    NOTE: Warning, this is another one of my fifty second poems. I wrote it while I was hungry in my room.PLEASE read it with a beat and you'll do just ...

    Mar 3, 2009
  • Other Re: YWS Bill of Rights

    xD Thank you everyone ^^

    Mar 3, 2009
  • Other Re: YWS Bill of Rights

    We the people of the Young Writer’s Society , in order to create a safe internet environment free from discrimination, unfairness, dishonesty, and spam; to encourage young writers to be ...

    Mar 3, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Spread Your Wings

    Thanks Anti-Pop and Rosey for the reviews. LOL on the 50 second joke Rosey. Sometimes they do work out better than my 5 minute ones.

    Mar 3, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Spread Your Wings

    xD Another one of my 50 second poems. Please ignore the all caps of the first letter of each line and the lack of punctuation! Spread your wings, And you ...

    Mar 3, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Winter Dust

    Hi Anti-Pop ^^ Shina here ;) I'll be your reviewer today since you are one of my favorite victims (mostly because your pieces are much funner to read then everyone ...

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Untitled R&B

    Take a look around you(.) What do you see? I promise you always Right here’s where I’ll be(.)

    Mar 2, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Impossible

    Hey writers, This poem is something that i hope we can all believe in. Believe in something beyond yourself. -thevoiceinside ----- I'm possible An innocent thought; a hope to dream(.) ...

    Mar 2, 2009


Making the simple complicated is commonplace; making the complicated simple, awesomely simple, that's creativity.
— Charles Mingus