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Re: DT: Academy for Heroes-In-Training
Is this storybook full? If so, please PM me in case I lose this threadxD ~Shina
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Forgive Me
Well, here I go again. This is my second attempt at poetry. Enjoy! :D --- You’ll have to forgive me, for borrowing your heart. But give me a second, to ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: I miss you
Hey Spike ^^ Shina here ;) I'll be your reviewer for today. Okay, well the overall point of this poem is a cliche, but something about it is fresh. I ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Betrayer Betrayed
Hey Spike ^^ Shina here once again, and I'm actually not disappointed this time. This was better than my original expectations. This poem is blunt. It's brief and quick just ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: The touch of a vampire
Hey Spike! Shina here again ;) I'm reviewing another one of poems since I've already started to attack your portfolio. You said you write like me, so I want to ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: A dead man's last wish
Oh god, I wannna go back to Earth. For I wanna wipe away the tears, From the eyes of little children. Oh god I wanna go back to Earth. For ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Can't Fly
NOTE: "~" this is a long extended note. You broke my heart; you made me cry. You ripped my wings so I can't fly. I trusted you to love me ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: String Cheese
NOTE: Warning, this is another one of my fifty second poems. I wrote it while I was hungry in my room.PLEASE read it with a beat and you'll do just ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: YWS Bill of Rights
xD Thank you everyone ^^
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: YWS Bill of Rights
We the people of the Young Writer’s Society , in order to create a safe internet environment free from discrimination, unfairness, dishonesty, and spam; to encourage young writers to be ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Spread Your Wings
Thanks Anti-Pop and Rosey for the reviews. LOL on the 50 second joke Rosey. Sometimes they do work out better than my 5 minute ones.
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Spread Your Wings
xD Another one of my 50 second poems. Please ignore the all caps of the first letter of each line and the lack of punctuation! Spread your wings, And you ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Winter Dust
Hi Anti-Pop ^^ Shina here ;) I'll be your reviewer today since you are one of my favorite victims (mostly because your pieces are much funner to read then everyone ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Untitled R&B
Take a look around you(.) What do you see? I promise you always Right here’s where I’ll be(.)
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Impossible
Hey writers, This poem is something that i hope we can all believe in. Believe in something beyond yourself. -thevoiceinside ----- I'm possible An innocent thought; a hope to dream(.) ...
Mar 2, 2009
