Angels-Symphony

Welcome Kikuharu, Bond Girl, and Ruth! I'm sure you'll all find YWS to be a great place to write and improve your writing. If you need any help, feel free ...

Hi Dr. Pepper! As you've requested, I will review. So... I read the first 2 paragraphs and stopped because I've already found a problem. I can't get over the fact ...

I love your stubby fingers and your crooked little toes(.) I love your chubby cheeks and your little button nose(.) I love your big blue eyes and your auburn hair(.) ...

[quote=]What I left behind Pictures that say more than words taped onto her wall, everyone of them were loved but she left them all(.) Make this a period. Paints in ...

Oh, wow, the ocean is really big! I'm so lucky to live here! Hi Mr.Clownfish! Hi Mr. Seahorse! Hi Mr. Ray! Hi Mrs. Eel! Hi Mr. Shark- The end.

Your boyfriend likes cats ^^ Welcome to YWS Daniel! I'm a greeter, just another one of those blue-titled people who are here to say "hey" and many other things. Since ...

Hi Kate ^^ Welcome to YWS!!! Perfect for a writer like yourself ;P I'm Shina, another one of those blue-titled people known as greeters. Since all the technical rules have ...

Hey Iain ^^ I came to review another one of your poems. I like this one and I don't like animal killing either. It's a really stupid sport. Though I ...

Since Rosey Unicorn has been absent lately, I'll inform you about unicorns in her place ^^ My little sister has a whole book about it, actually, he has a collection ...

Youreit^^ I remember you from the chat! It's good to jump into things around here and just get started, as long as you're willing to learn ;P Since just about ...

Hey Jklhjkhkh ^^ Shina here ;P And I'll be your greeter for today. Welcome to YWS! And wow, that's an interesting combination of words you got there ^^ . No ...

Hi Loredaen ^^ Welcome to YWS ;P I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer today. If you need any help learning the ropes of this place, feel free to PM/aim/msn ...

[quote=]Death follows you like the wind(.) ()you never here* it(,)< Since it seems you're into darker poems, why don't you check this one out Click Here It took a lot ...

Hi Megan ^^ I'll be your reviewer for this evening ;) Your overall drawing is very neat and clean, a thing all manga artists definitely need :D The uniform is ...

A problem a lot of writers have is being able to plot their points. Getting the characters and picking a setting is the easy part. Deciding how the moral of ...