Angels-Symphony

oops, double post xD

Hey June ^^ I'm training myself to be an instructor, so I thought I'd come by and see one of the pro's work xD It was ugly; but at that ...

Hi Cynara ^^ I'm Shina, and I will be your reviewer this evening ;) I knew we should have never come here. It had bad idea written all over the ...

It was all over now. This beginning was good. It's not much of a hook, but at least it gets the readers into the story. The war’s daunting cry lead ...

How stupid. It's overusing a famous story and putting it on ICE. And what songs could possibly be used in Harry Potter? All of the music they use in HP ...

All the time xD But when you're writing a novel, you have to remember why you're writing it. When people say that I can't do it, or criticize me, I ...

If you're going to do it, do it well ;) I did a a story with multiple points of view and it went pretty well. The main thing is that ...

I'm not writing a novel... I finished it, and now I have to edit =_= Oh goodness. Query letters. They're freaking me out and I think I'm going to pass ...

I started talking when I was one =_= And boy, I was annoying. Talking fluently when I was 2. Started singing when I was 3... Yeah, you can't stop your ...

This seems like an interesting story ^^ But now, you need style and skill ;) I agree with Fortuna, you need to fix your descriptions. They're good, but the actions ...

Whoa! You work with a publisher? That's cool ^^ I'm sure there's a lot of people here interested in selling their work xD Welcome to YWS, Mike ^^ You got ...

I really need something to learn the basics of witch mythology and magic before I can start writing my next fantasy fiction. I need to know how they cast spells, ...

Hey Whisperer ^^ Hey! You're Filipino! Like me xD I'm Shina, btw. Nice to see you like writing now ^^ But have no fear! YWS is here! We'll make you ...

Not sure if this is the right forum, but I need coaching! I'm someone who's been writing for a while, but not professionally. Some time less than a year ago ...

I think this is the right place to post this question according to the forum's description. But anyways, since I finished my first novel and query letters aren't something fun ...