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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Waiting For the World to Fall

    Sometimes I wonder what it would be like if the world were to fall, if the walls around me were to crumble and the ground beneath my feet were to ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: At what age did you start writing and

    I wrote my first story in preschool.... Something about a cat? I first started becoming serious about writing novels and poetry last October. Before that I did stuff for school ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Welcome to YWS Black Moon! I'm Shina, one of the greeters xD I'm sure that YWS will definitely be a good place for you. Just post something in the welcome ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: random writing?

    Hey TypeWriter ^^ I'm Shina and shall be your reviewer this afternoon. I woke to the the dead silence of the on-going night. Kind or ironic,don't you think? It sounds ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Leather and Lace - Chapter One

    Hey Cammie ^^ I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer this afternoon. I stare up at the blue-haired boy standing on the porch. Yes! Finally someone who can include multi-colored ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: How Do You Improve Flow?

    A lot of authors have problems when it comes to flow, but no fear, there is in fact a way to make flow come to you. Flow is when you ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Defining Strength [part 1]

    Shina, is it? Well, that's what I'll be calling you now. Anyway, let's point out that I just eat up your writing like buttered toast. It's delightful, and I can't ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hiya.

    Welcome to YWS, Elise ^^ I'm Shina, another one of those blue-titled people known as greeters. It is my job and my pleasure to greet the newbs of YWS :P ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Adding to the 95 pages....

    Hey Tala ^^ I'm Shina, another one of those blue-titled people known as greeters. It is my job and my pleasure to greet the newbs of YWS. Yes! This is ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Johnny's Adventures In Wonderland

    Hi Khimera ^^ Welcome to YWS. I'm Shina, your reviewer for this evening. The mirror basilica Capitalize all the first letters of your chapter name. Screech! Scream! Crash! Puff! Ugh! ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Prolouge- Midnight Kiss

    Hey Mario ^^ I'll be your reviewer this evening ;) I throw the freezing cold water on my face, my palms are begging to numb as they are pressed against ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Black Roses

    Hey Hawkie ^^ I'll be your reviewer this evening. Their love was all a put-on. We didn't need their lilies* and red lips ; passion and kisses and words ; ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dreaming Durring war

    Welcome to YWS Master ^^ I'm Shina and I'll be your reviewer this evening. First things first, your title. "During" is spelled with one r xD Faster and faster , ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Untitled Prologue :)

    Hey Moo ^^ I'll be your reviewer this evening. Avynn seemed even more alive in its last hours. I like this beginning. I haven't seen an approach lie this often, ...

    Jun 26, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Carnelian

    Hey Lisa ^^ Welcome to YWS. I'm Shina, and I'll be your reviewer this evening. “Carnelian!!!” it was Da. He was angry again. Be careful when you start a story ...

    Jun 26, 2009


Every generation laughs at the old fashions, but follows religiously the new.
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