Angels-Symphony

:D Ellie! I'm so proud of you! xD Not even a year on YWS, yet ;___; *sniffles* xD But seriously, YWS is life-changing. Also, these tips are great :D

Seeing that you haven't been thoroughly critiqued yet, I've come for a visit ;) I. Nitpicks The long dimly-lit hallway grew narrower in my mind as I walked toward a ...

At first I wasn't sure what I thought of this poem until I reached the second stanza. The last line made it make perfect sense. The only problem I had ...

Hey Shade ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I. Nitpicks Listen Silence sings Like nothing else If you read this in your mind, and you read ...

Hey Brain ;) Shina here to do a review for you. I thought the beginning of this poem was pretty charming, but now onto the review. I. Nitpicks When I ...

Hey Ellie ^^ Shina here ;) I just popped on to YWS and saw you posted a poem. This poem for me had its ups and downs. Certain lines stuck ...

Hey Napal ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I've been on hiatus for a while, and I just came back this morning. You haven't gotten any ...

xD It was scary at first, because I saw the mods and JM's still had their colors, so I thought I was fired because I've been busy at school -.-" ...

Err, I apologize for the technical difficulties. If the words aren't in the right shape, it might be because it transferred wrong. I'm working on it -.-"

Note: hey guys! I haven't been posting on YWS lately, but I'm trying to write poetry again xD The more I reread this, the more it seems like one of ...

Ewww, more pictures of me :P Hehe xD I'm trying to accept myself now, and I even have a tumblr that my friends, and even random people from my school ...

I agree ^^ You're beautifulllll, Aqua :D -Shina

Today She Dreams :D -Shina

WDDDDD! In the mood to review? I have short short story up that I need some criticism one ^^ It's called "Today She Dreams" -Shina

Thanks for the comment, Ofir ^^ -Shina