Angels-Symphony

. By the way, I still think this is pretty cliched. I'm sorry, but I still do. . I have to agree with my Latin coach Antigoney, here. There's not ...

Hey Angel ^^ Shina here as requested ;) “Pain without love.” Three Days Grace Is this a quote? Or a chapter name? IT doesn't seem to be apart of the ...

Thanks for reading ^^

Hey Gsp ^^ Shina here as requested ;) Past countless trees they ran, neither gaining nor reducing [s]any[/s] distance between them. The punctuation should be: "Past countless trees, they ran, ...

Hey Dakota ^^ Here as requested ;) I'm a fan of Elves and fantasy, so I'll be extra picky with how you portray them :P Wyndolyn could feel the blood ...

A common writer problem ^^ But don't worry, you're not alone. Writer's get new ideas for novels all the time. The best thing to do is get a notebook to ...

Shina here as requested ;) Her mother calls *Her voice so sweet *Her is repetitive, so perhaps changing it to "a" And sing to you All through the night I'm ...

moved Will you please review this? It's for the 'Which Path to Take' contest. Dragon Tamer Fantasy Fiction G Thanks! ~Tayla ----------- I moved this for wrong thread reasons:P

Here as requested ^^ I'm not particularly trained to critique lyrics, but I'll try xD [s]Well[/s] You are my best friend [s]You are[s] a ray of sun I think it ...

Magnus, your piece has been reviewed ;)

Hey Magnus ^^ Shina here for a review as requested ;) “It appears to be the remains of a glass slipper,” I said, squinting through my magnifying glass. The splintered ...

OMGSH! Who are these models?! I really wanted to buy me a boat, but now, I am so getting one.

Jetpack's review is complete ;)

Hey Jetback ^^ Shina here as requested ;) Sometimes the trees called his name on the wind. This is a decent hook, but I think it needs some rewording. I ...

Hey Chaos ^^ Shina here :P And since you asked for it, the instructors will bring it ;) First things first, please use proper grammar. "For real's" is really not ...