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Re: my world
My world is shattered. My life is broken. My heart is filled, This is really tell-y, dogs. You know the difference, I've seen you review. with you desires and lies. ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: All That It Took
……And so they said to this little boy of eight, If he went on dreaming doom would be his fate. And ellipses is only 3 periods, and I don't think ...
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Re: Report a good member!
I'd like to report June for being a totally awesome editor/friend/writing coach for being, well, awesome and for hooking some agents with her magical abilities. Rosey, for answering my fantasy ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Bird Song
You scream with pleasure, “Oh, what a treat it is To catch the perfect.” This doesn't make so much sense. I understand what you're trying to say, but you need ...
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Re: Fantasist (Revised)
Hey Zanna ^^ Here as requested. The rough autumn wind blew through the room, ruffling the curtains in front of the open window, and teasingly played with the slumbering girl’s ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]
Post some more guys ;)
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Unseen
Hey Winter ^^ Shina here for a review ;) No one can see me For who I really am In the dark is where I be Hidden by the judging, ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: [closed]
Mr. Andy, you have brought reviewing to a whole no level :P I will have to take these things to account, or wait for my editors to fix it xD
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: The Tree
Hey Nixie ^^ Shina here for a review ;) The tree with his timeless grace of swaying leaves and limbs, calls up the songs of heaven when he rustles with ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
Lulz
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: [closed]
Why are they running? You're a little vague. Try to describe more. The preface is meant to be vague xD This is a preview of what's up ahead, so it ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: What Are You Writing Now?
Working on my second trilogy, the Kingdom Series (until renamed). I'm kind of being lazy with it, though xD Also some short stories and poems for my writing class. I ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: The Buddy System Archives
NOT ACCEPTING/ RETIRED Name: Shina age: 14 What you write: Usually novels, but I also write poetry, short stories, and non-fictional essays and reports on the side. My genres mostly ...
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Re: Staring Asians
Asians usually stare at each other people because they're very critical xD For example, my family in the Philippines. If someone were to come back after a few years to ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: The Completely Awesome Battle
While Pork was taking a bite out of his hot dog from the sidelines, and Shina was stabbing a square of cantaloupe, two giant drops of fatty oil and cantaloupe-y ...
Jul 15, 2009
