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  • Narrative Poetry Re: As I lay

    Hey Ian ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) Lover who woke me as I lay, I dreamt of you Taking sight of past suns, till gaze ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Title Help?

    October's Burns stands out for me, and December Scars seems a bit odd because Christmas is during December. That wouldn't make much sense. As long as you stick with October, ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Telephone Call

    Hey Living ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I won't criticize much on the idea since it's your writing and it should be what you want ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Random Facts Are Great!! Hello!

    Welcome SilverSun ^^ I'm one of the instructor-greeters here on YWS. It is my job and my pleasure to greet the newbs here on YWS. Since everyone just about covered ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]

    Sorry about the delays guys. I'm only doing about 5 requests a week from my thread so I won't get carpal tunnel. I'm also trying to keep these reviews top ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    I think what we're lookin' at are the Admins of YWS. I can feel the power radiating from that photo >_> O_O Meep, I can totally feel it radiating. I ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi and I'm sorry.

    Hey Amatuli ^^ Welcome to YWS! I'm Shina, one of the instructor greeters here ;) It is my job and my pleasure to greet the newbs here on YWS. Some ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello, and thanks for having me.

    Welcome to YWS Alec Laine ^^ I'm Shina, one of the instructor-greeters here on the site. It is my job and my pleasure to greet the newbs of YWS, so... ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Facebook Mania!

    Hey Fantasy ^^ Shina here for a review ;) This would have been far easier Had I started it on time. Now I have to get this done And think ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Too many people

    *_* Whoa, Hawkie, Rosey, and Jabbs have spoken. Those are some really good pieces of advice there, Amon ^^ However, I don't think they mentioned anything about how to kill ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Sisters

    Hey KayC ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) Sisters screech and bicker and scream, and pull out each other’s hair; Sisters are always by your side, ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Angel

    No need to thank me xD It does have potential. And just because something is sad or depressing, doesn't mean it's emo :P Oh, I forgot to mention that we ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Soldier

    Hey Nouveaux ^^ Shina here for a review ;) napalm-colored eyes Napalm? Is that a shade? too wide, she falters What is too wide? and bursts in airless conflagration; Bursts ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Have You Ever...?

    Hey Meggy ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I. Nitpicks with hopes and dreams of times to never be. I feel that the second line should ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Angel

    Hey Pudin ^^ Shina here to do a review ;) I. Nitpicks Look at him and remember his voice This is more of a command when I think you mean ...

    Jul 23, 2009


Every really new idea looks crazy at first.
— Alfred North Whitehead