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  • Narrative Poetry Re: As I lay

    Hey Ian ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) Lover who woke me as I lay, I dreamt of you Taking sight of past suns, till gaze ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Title Help?

    October's Burns stands out for me, and December Scars seems a bit odd because Christmas is during December. That wouldn't make much sense. As long as you stick with October, ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Telephone Call

    Hey Living ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I won't criticize much on the idea since it's your writing and it should be what you want ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Random Facts Are Great!! Hello!

    Welcome SilverSun ^^ I'm one of the instructor-greeters here on YWS. It is my job and my pleasure to greet the newbs here on YWS. Since everyone just about covered ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]

    Sorry about the delays guys. I'm only doing about 5 requests a week from my thread so I won't get carpal tunnel. I'm also trying to keep these reviews top ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    I think what we're lookin' at are the Admins of YWS. I can feel the power radiating from that photo >_> O_O Meep, I can totally feel it radiating. I ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi and I'm sorry.

    Hey Amatuli ^^ Welcome to YWS! I'm Shina, one of the instructor greeters here ;) It is my job and my pleasure to greet the newbs here on YWS. Some ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello, and thanks for having me.

    Welcome to YWS Alec Laine ^^ I'm Shina, one of the instructor-greeters here on the site. It is my job and my pleasure to greet the newbs of YWS, so... ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Facebook Mania!

    Hey Fantasy ^^ Shina here for a review ;) This would have been far easier Had I started it on time. Now I have to get this done And think ...

    Jul 25, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Too many people

    *_* Whoa, Hawkie, Rosey, and Jabbs have spoken. Those are some really good pieces of advice there, Amon ^^ However, I don't think they mentioned anything about how to kill ...

    Jul 24, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Sisters

    Hey KayC ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) Sisters screech and bicker and scream, and pull out each other’s hair; Sisters are always by your side, ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Angel

    No need to thank me xD It does have potential. And just because something is sad or depressing, doesn't mean it's emo :P Oh, I forgot to mention that we ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Soldier

    Hey Nouveaux ^^ Shina here for a review ;) napalm-colored eyes Napalm? Is that a shade? too wide, she falters What is too wide? and bursts in airless conflagration; Bursts ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Have You Ever...?

    Hey Meggy ^^ Shina here to do a review for you ;) I. Nitpicks with hopes and dreams of times to never be. I feel that the second line should ...

    Jul 23, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Angel

    Hey Pudin ^^ Shina here to do a review ;) I. Nitpicks Look at him and remember his voice This is more of a command when I think you mean ...

    Jul 23, 2009


May you never steal, lie, or cheat. But if you must steal, then steal away my sorrows. And if you must lie, then lie with me all the nights of your life. And if you must cheat, then please, cheat death.
— An Unknown Bride, Leap Year