Angels-Symphony

Hey Skjold^^ Shina here for a review ;) Overall Your title is the "Mage of Dragons", yes? And there is more than one mage? Your mages don't have unique personalities. ...

Hey Ikram ^^ Shina here for a review ;) Overall The main problem I see with this is redundancy. The timbers fell from him as his arms became loose and ...

Hey Lily ^^ Shina here for a review ;) I'm on an overall spree today :P Overall First things first, your title. I feel like it's halfway hooking, halfway not. ...

Hey Dakota ^^ Shina here for a review ;) I'm on an overall review spree, so I'm not nitpicking today. So... Overall When I first began reading this, I thought ...

Hey Gun ^^ Sorry I'm late in replying xD It was late yesterday, so I didn't get a chance until this morning. Well, when I review poetry I usually tell ...

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9/10 6th graders think that, apparently =_= But then again, they don't discover the awesome-osities of geeks until 7th grade ::P

Hey Eddy ^^ Shina here ;) That's a very good question. I used to search fashion books and interior design books so I could make every single detail in my ...

Hey Marshie ^^ Shina here! Please don't bump your thread by being the first to reply. Critiques will come ^^ If you really wanted a review, just post in the ...

Hey Jishbee ^^ Shina here to do a review ;) A dashed line which divides the road Imparts drivers to stick to a code. The first line seems to be ...

So... Here I go ^^ Character Name: Chantrea Dunixi (only those who know her well call her Chantrea, everyone else just calls her Witch or Dunixi) Species: Witch Good or ...

Okay, Pen! Shina here to do a review for you! I tried reviewing it the other day, but I was staring at it for quite a while and I decided ...

7/10 ,you need a comma :P

7/10 I'm a fan of Avatar, but this one's a bit fuzzy, the image.

xD I can't believe I"m making a character like this. Name : Delancy, Avaline Age : 14 Grade: 10 Gender: female Physical Appearance: - Nationality: Taiwanese/French - Height: 5'4 - ...