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Re: Have a NaNoWriMo.org account? (08)
I believe it's angels.symphony ^^
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: .:Dream Catcher:. [preface]
Aughhh...this preface thing. XD My personal preferences are coming in play, but I really don't like the idea of prefaces. This reads much more like a first chapter than a ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: .:Dream Catcher:. [preface]
xD Yeah, it's a bit vague. It's a preface, though. So it's meant to be that way. It's a glimpse at the future because the characters not mentioned much will ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: The Little Mushroom
Please, correct me if I'm wrong, but aren't we ALL the authors? xD Oh, KL is talking about how we're writing for the double-trouble writing huddle. We're getting an idea ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Malevolence.
Hey Emma ^^ Shina here for a review ;) Hope you're having fun in Wales xD Sorry I keep PMing you when you should be enjoying that vacation of yours. ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Poetry
Hey Georgie ^^ Shina here to do a review for you! I do warn you that even though we're in the same writing class, I don't go easy with reviews ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Kingdom of Gold {chapter 3}
Updated :P And back from the bottom of the pile ;)
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Kingdom of Gold {chapter 2}
Updated ;) Cleaning out my folders and I decided to update xD
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Kingdom of Gold {chapter 1}
updated and back from the bottom of the pile ;)
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: .:Dream Catcher:. [preface]
Hey guys ^^ I think I posted this on YWS once before when it was an ickier draft, but since I'm cleaning out my folders and I don't want to ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Retrieving the Lost [beginning]
updated and temporarily discontinued xD
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: In the Shadows [preface]
Hey guys ^^ This is the preface to a story I decided to write down xD The poem is one of the first poems I wrote on YWS, so it's ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: The Little Mushroom
Does anyone know when we can start? xD Yeah, I was wondering about that too, Tiger. I'm now one of the heads of the storybook, and I got a message ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Notebook and Pen (temp. title)
Hey Tally ^^ Shina here for a review ;) Overall The main problem I saw with this is that you're jam packing your sentences with adjectives. There's a define line ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Wings of Forever
Hey Fantasy ^^ Shina here for a review ;) Overall You're half telling, half showing, and it's turning into an info-dump: The freezing temperature broke through the thin coat of ...
Jul 29, 2009
