Angels-Symphony

Hey Marzipan ^^ I decided to face your alien space guns are review this poem xD I. Nitpicks do not fall too far, fast and sink into black dirt I ...

Rosey suggested that George's memories be tainted in a different way. The king gets a girl who looks like George somewhat and alter both their memories so they think they're ...

More Notes on this: George realizing the errors of his ways and working to undo the damage. George was taken while his sister wasn't in the village. His sister comes ...

Hey Evi ^^ Shina here to do a review ;) xD It's long overdue, but you know, I promised :P Like usual, reviewing people like you is kind of challenging. ...

Now, this situation wouldn't work as a historical fiction at all. O__O Shoot, I forgot I have to study when it comes to historical fiction =___= Maybe I'll write this ...

knowledge base?

Well, I've always found it difficult to critique your works, 'cause you're "up there" and I'm "down here" in terms of writing XD I feel the same as Meep. But ...

xD I heard Kylan found Gal on facebook.

xD Thanks guys. At least a good idea came out of an odd yard sale. -Shina

Hey guys. I wrote this poem for my mom because, um, er, well, she thought I didn't care about her birthday today. It's a long story... But here it is. ...

I lol'd hard. You have lack of conflict, lack of plot. Good job. There is only one "character", and there is no antagonist. And there's a random switch of voices, ...

Gal just turned eleven! She's grown so much! -Shina

[removed] Thanks for the help ^^

Hey there Mayo ^^ Shina here to do a review ;) Looks like you're in need of help. I was reading the review from Abi, and I wasn't sure if ...

xD This thread is insane. Good thing Lin doesn't know it exists.