Angelreader77

Hey Alfonso! Here to review~ I loved it. Your idea was amazing, and the was you portrayed it even better. Your opening sentence makes it really hard for the reader ...

Although appearances can be deceiving , not everyone often realises that. That is so true.

I am so late :/ This is my first storybook, so bear with me. I think Demeter should be on Poseidon's side. She has an impenetrable grudge against Hades. xD

I am so late :/ This is my first storybook, so bear with me. I think Demeter should be on Poseidon's side. She has an impenetrable grudge against Hades. xD

I am so late :/ This is my first storybook, so bear with me. I think Demeter should be on Poseidon's side. She has an impenetrable grudge against Hades. xD

Hi there! Here to review! I really like this piece. Your choice of word was quite good. And most of all, your beginning really pulled me in. People often don't ...

Hi there! I just realized that have have been here for a long time and I haven't reviewed much. :( Shameful, I know. I will review: Poetry - Any kind ...

Review!~ It's a nice poem. Your choice of word was good and you conveyed your ideas nicely. What I didn't like was that in some places the flow just sort ...

A flash of lightning in the sky. Apart from that, Harry Potter :D Angelreader77

Well, this was an English interpretation, but I thought I'd post it. This my first-ish short story, so feel free to rip it into pieces. :D She came to a ...

Can I be Demeter? Or Hera if no one's taken that one? :D Name : Demeter Gender : Female Appearance : Demeter has long dark brown hair. She has almond ...

I like this poem a lot! It's more of a riddle like you said. There isn't a proper flow or rhythm to this piece though. I would, if I could, ...

Hi!~ I really like your poem. It's so original and the idea behind it is impressive. I like how you portrayed it. I

Hey! I shall try and help as much as I can. I like your overall plot, an interesting topic. I also like how you're trying to approach and show it, ...

I've been here for just 3 months, but those have been some really amazing months. I've met so many people, made so many friends, improved my writing and a lot ...