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Re: Tears on my face
Hi! ~Here to review Like you said, this was a emotional poem. You conveyed your emotions through it quite well. The flow was good, not wavering at any point. Also, ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Have you ever met a YWSer?
I've gotten two of my friends to join, and one friend persuaded me to join. It wasn't really persuasion just really: "You're a writer? Me too! Join this site, boy." ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: To say goodbye is not so hard...
Hi! Here to review~~ I really like this poem. A lot.
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: 11:11 11/11/11
Hi! Here to review~~ I like this poem. It has a nice rhythm to it, which I like. The grammar is sound, and the idea good. I like the descriptions ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: A Drop of Crimson
This is just ... whoa. Amazing. Absolutely amazing. This is the best thing I've ever read. :D *Reads poem again* Nitpicks- I felt the need to cause her last strife. ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Have you ever met a YWSer?
HarryPotterRocks: what about me??? :( and ChocoCookie? *Edit : *SEES THE 'YOU'* :D
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Have you ever met a YWSer?
My turn! Well it should have been mine first since I started it but I forgot. :P I've met shloka19 ( Duh) , TwistedMuffins she introduced me to this site
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Have you ever met a YWSer?
So, basically, have you ever met a fellow YWSer in real life?
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's playground
Review~~ Me like this song. Me like this song a lot . I can relate to this song,some how. I like the chorus a lot. One thing: Don’t cross the ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Save the tears.
Sparky! Here to review... I don't have much to say, except I like it. I don't know much about songs, see. But I lIKE this song. A lot. Don’t let ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Hell plays with Heaven
Hi Cookie! Review~~ I love the concept behind this poem and your choice of words It is in_ter_res_ting. Some nitpicks... People write and make things with sand, With good memories ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: The Ghost who plays the piano...
Hi! Nice poem! Me likey :D Why does that phantom sit up there, its frozen tears dusty with age. I like this part the best. It's original. Overall, no nitpicks. ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: Photgraphy: Roses, pigeons and Peacocks
I like all the photos! I don't know much about photography, so I can't say much. The first and fourth picture were amazing, I don't know how you took them ...
Oct 24, 2011 -
Re: The Three Faced Cat
Overall, I loved it. Your flow in the story is good not too fast of too slow. The capturing of emotion is outstanding. I really like you descriptions, this one ...
Oct 21, 2011 -
Re: Greetings, Earthlings!
Hiya! Call me Angel. I LOVE reading! Harry Potter, Lois Lowry ( The giver and messenger were awesome) . Me love sports as well ! Even I thrive in cold ...
Oct 19, 2011
