Angela

I have to say, I think that the first 3 stanzas were better than the last bit. The first three were original. I got the feeling that you really felt ...

I don't read much poetry, but I thought this was very good, and quite enjoyable to read in a sort of melancholy way. Love it all!

I really don't have any critique. This was really good. You did the exposition-via-dialogue spectacularly. Is there any more to this? Can you post it?

I've never been to Ireland and there is no chance of me going any time soon, so any information about the climate, people, customs, or anything really, would be very ...

Help? I want to change the font my blog is in, and I've looked at some of the old advice and tried that, but nothing is working. Can you PM ...

The first paragraph about the first sighting of the gypsies was quite powerful. Now, to the questions and suggestions: Questions: 1. Why does it matter if Gabriel has a rosary ...

This was a very good story. There were just a few things that I thought needed to be changed. In the bit about how your MC walked past this locker ...

A very good story. Maybe you want to clarify in the beginning, though, what's going on. I was lost for awhile, and it's harder to get into a story if ...

First of all, my condolences on the source of this masterpiece. Only very strong emotions could have evoked enough pain to write this. That aside, I would say that you ...

This is a very good plot for a story, if perhaps a tad overdone. The part where Greg is revealed, that happened so fast it took me a bit to ...

Love this story! So right. I didn't see anything. Perhaps, in the beginning, the word 'spheres' gets a little repetive. Maybe you would like to substitute 'globes of ethereal magnificence'? ...

This story was very touching, and truly amazing. It was sad, but at the same time not. It merely exposed the ugly side of the world in a very blunt, ...

Hey! Can I please get a review? I would really appreciate some good feedback. Here's the link that meets your specifications: Hope you enjoy it!

This is a very very good story. I'm just curious: 1. You say that the narrator is eleven. It sounds like it was written from more of a 7-9 year ...

Hey everyone! I found this through Writer's Digest too. LOVE THAT MAGAZINE! :D So here's just some very basic info about me: 1. I am fourteen and female. 2. I ...