AngelMarie

i really like this story! i cannot wait to hear more! you're a wonderful writer, keep up the great work!

Thank yall so much! this really helped and i will try and apply it to my future poems. Poetry isn't really my thing, but i write it from time to ...

I liked this alot, I could really feel the conflicting pain from Dante. I like his aggressivness. Good job! keep it up!

Thank you so much ! (:

I liked this a lot. I love the emotion betrayed, I agree with Wickedwonder, it usually is the girl in love, so i think this is a nice, refreshing, twist. ...

This is the summary to the book I'm writing. Tell me what ya think, thanks! April Johnson moved from Oakland California to Thomaston Georgia to live with her dad. Her ...

This was truly .....I'm speechless! I felt like i was the girl, that's how strong of an emotion you put into this story. I could Visualize everything, It was heartbreaking, ...

Wow, just wow. That was a great poem, no great is the understatement of the year! Bravo my friend, Bravo! I dabble in poetry, but never will i write anything, ...

I love it! I could feel tears filling my eyes as I read it. You have a great sense of imagery, and I could definitely feel the emotions of the ...

I too was drawn in by the beginning. I love the way you describe Jacob walking to school, the adjectives you used were good. I was also posed with some ...

When I first met you I didn't think much about me and you , But since then our friendship grew. We talked from the morning light, Until you were wishing ...

I liked this poem alot! It's imagery is great, i'm a beginner at writing, so im not looking at punctuation and spelling as i am at the message. The message ...