AngelMarie

Hey there Mr. Knightly, Bravo on this picture! I dabble in photography, and i don't think i have come close to taken a picture this good! I love the way ...

I absolutely loved this! Other than what was said above, about grammar and all that, it was perfect! Yes the ending was rushed, but if you drag it out just ...

I really liked this a lot, everyone else has already pretty much summed up the little mistakes so I'm just here to say i liked this a lot(: keep it ...

MORE I NEED MORE!!!!! haha this is amazing, you had me hooked from the first chapter, and now i'm hanging on a cliff! keep writing!(: its great, it really is!

I think its great! you never cease to amaze me! (:

thank you so much for your wonderful help! I don't usually write poetry so I'm not the best. haha but i really appreciate your critique, and it will help me ...

i really like this poem alot! i could feel the deep emotions in it, and it had me drawn in til the very end! Other than what Kiwi pointed it ...

i like this one, my dad smokes and i hate it! if doesn't take away the appeal i don't know what will. i like your writing style! keep it up!(:

These are beautiful! i wish i could draw like that! keep up the amazing work!(:

You said you liked me and I liked you too. Everything you told me made all my dreams comes true. You told me everything I wanted to hear, and your ...

not really my type of genre, but it is really good writing. It was like toy story, but you made it into your own, it was great, even though i ...

not really my type of genre, but it is really good writing. It was like toy story, but you made it into your own, it was great, even though i ...

omg this is amazing! keep it coming coming because now i'm hooked! i Can not wait to see what happens next! (:

I like this poem a lot! i could really feel the emotions in it. and i love your broad vocabulary! Keep up the great work!

I really like this poem! It hits home with me because my older step sister moved out about a year ago to live with her dad. I say try and ...