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Re: Canvas of Memories
This is amazing. So much emotion, it's breathtaking. I found myself trying not to cry while reading it. You are a really talented writer! Keep up the great work. Really ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Mixed (edit #4)
it's super hard not to tear up while reading this. I say keep it going it's great! :D keep up the fantastic work!
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Mixed (edit #2)
you should absolutely keep going! this is a wonderful story and i must read more! I canot handle that ending! It's just too sad. you're a great writer keep it ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Sixteen)
Skins! this was absolutely amazing! Not that I'm surprised :D As always you had me in from the start! I was very intrigued with the river scene. especially the kiss! ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: Too Little, Too Late
Also To Zaddie, what would you suggest to a replacement word or words for 'loved ones'? I want it to be broad enough to include friends and family but not ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Too Little, Too Late
Thank you guys so much! Like I said I'm not a great poet but i really think this is one of my better ones. I know the grammar is bad, ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Too Little, Too Late
I'm not a good poet so bear with me. And this is not a true story it just kind of came to me, although i did have friend that cut ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 3
Okay this was good, i found my self asking questions though like: 1. I thought it was Friday so why did Rose say we have school tomorrow 2. If she ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Bad girl, good liar~3
Hey There Wicked! This was really good. Although I felt that the end of the chapter stopped at the wrong part. Maybe add some more to this chapter. Just a ...
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: I l-o-v-e y-o-u {EDITED}
This is sweet I really like it. I love the elemnets of the story, that Barry can't talk and Ella can't see! It's a good story! :D
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: The Death Of Sara WiseMan (edited)
Thanks for the review. Yes I know I need to work on My punctuation a lot, and I'll try and edit it soon. The plot gets a lot thicker in ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: The Death Of Sara WiseMan (edited)
Thank ya Seraphina! I have edited so it will be easier to read and i have changed Katy Perry to somone i made up. LOL thanks for your review! and ...
Oct 13, 2010 -
Re: Bad Girl, Good Liar~2
Hey there Wicked, Great job! I like that fact how you kept emphasizing how much of a drunk the MC's mom is. I'm ready to see what happens next! :D ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: The Death Of Sara WiseMan (edited)
haha okay i'll change katy perry and space it out some thanks for the review! :D
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: The Death Of Sara WiseMan (edited)
Chapter 1 As I sit in Mrs. Rowe's 12th grade English class, waiting for her to call my name for roll, I twirl a piece of my curly brown hair ...
Oct 12, 2010