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Re: What you taught me <3
Thanks for the reviews you guys. I really appreciate it. I fixed the spacing, sorry about that. I copied it from a word document and that's how it turned out. ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: What you taught me <3
I used to think you were my whole world; Until you showed me how big the world really was. I used to think that you were my whole life; Until ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Talking to myself
I really like this. A lot. I was drawn in from the title. I thought it sounded like something I would do. lol. But I like the message of the ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Where Screams Aren't Heard
Hey There! First off I wanted to tell you I love the title. It drew me in, and I had to read it. So that's a really good thing, to ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: The Reign Of Love
It had been two months since my father, my king, was condemned to the Guillotine. The committee was after the whole royal family but my mother had taken me and ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: Like 98'
This was really good. I like the flow of the poem. "Nostalgia, like memories of being five-years-old, I really like this first line because it drew me and made me ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Bloodshed Kindness
Wow this was amazing!! I'm not the best poet, but even I know that this is great stuff! I can't wait to read more from you, keep writing :)
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Forever 18
Well it's not a Vampire book. It's actually going to be a very small part in a book I'm writing with my friend. It will not end up being cliche ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Forever 18
Wrote this Friday night, what do`you think? Everything I thought about my life had changed. It had been a lie, all of it. My parents, my friends, everything that ever ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: Romeo and Cinderella
This was really amazing :) I love the title, Romeo and Cinderella instead of Romeo and Juliet. It's cool, the ending was my favorite part. Because it's not a fairy ...
Sep 18, 2011 -
Re: True Love
Thank you guys! I just got bored and started typing, and bam! Poem lol. But yeah i wasn't really trying to rhyme, but in some parts it turned out like ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: True Love
I got bored, so I starting writing, review away! You hold my hand, and my heart sings And I know that you would never leave When I lay awake at ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: I Wanted to Change My Name
I love this! It flows really nicely, and it is the perfect length. :) I'm not really a poet or anything so I don't have a review, but this is ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: Animal Life 90210 part 2
This is a great follow up to the first one. I have just got to read more! I love the character of the mom, and love how she's just like ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Animallife 90210
This is some really comical stuff. I really like where you're going with this story. I know that you are not really shooting for good grammar and stuff like that, ...
Aug 31, 2011
