AngelKnight900

Wow this was really good. It actually looked like a movie. It was so lively and I could see a sad setting and a hospital bed and her limp body ...

I never thought that today was going to be the day I would talk to my brother. "Hello, Jay" he said. "Merry Christmas!" I smiled through tears that were desperate ...

I instantly thought of this during a trip to the mall so review, review, and review. I was sixteen when Savannah's mom died. We met in high school and I ...

Yeah, this is not my strongest chapter so I would really appreciate reviews. Madison My lips still tingled from that kiss last night. I got out of bed in a ...

My only question is why is the rest of the chapter a spoiler. Is it suppose to be a spoiler or did you press spoiler by accident? But anyways, I ...

This is great and I'm really enjoying reading this story but I think that you should have extended this a little bit because I'm not too sure about the ending. ...

Andre Waking up to the smell of pancakes, I lifted myself off the couch. I could hear Madison singing in the kitchen, and as I walked there, I started to ...

Hmmm....I like it. I really like it. At first, I was a little confused because I instantly thought you got the novel and short story forum mixed up XD but ...

Omg! I hate it when I want to remember something but then I can't remember. I like things like this. This is the thing that just points out our human ...

Wow this is really good. I am unbelievably impressed and I can't wait to go and read the rest. What I like the most about this is that you went ...

I really enjoyed reading this but I think that you went a little too fast with this. When you go too fast with something, you end up missing the good ...

*clears throat* I am going to review....ready! :D Well I think that you got a good story here but I'm still a little confused. How did the girl suddenly appeared ...

I really liked this prologue but I do think in some parts it came off as vague. I'm not very fond of prologues but I came to see that they're ...

Allright.....I have been waiting days and days and did I mention days for you to post something and finally you do. Now..I kind of like this chapter but I still ...

Honestly, I didn't think your chapter two needed much editing. I also personally think that your first chapter was extraordinary and it's better for people to think that your chapters ...