AngelKnight900

I like it but in a way, it's a little too open like anyone could interpret this in many ways which in some situations is all right but I think ...

This makes me appreciate having my best friends to a great limit. I think this is a poem that shows how much we should appreciate the ones who love and ...

This was a wonderful start to the novel. I really can't find anything negative about it so I'm just going to with the positive. Lol. I liked this girl Anita ...

To start off, The one who looks on; asking for belief, the one who believes; asking for a savoir, the one saves; asking for death. is my favorite line. It ...

Does it really have to be this short? :/ When I read this, I instantly got interested until I noticed the length. If you actually had more for this, add ...

I liked this but in a way it was very rushed. You could have gotten into more detail about the parents death and the main characters time in the training ...

Is it right? To be the one who loves you and stay Or should we just separate Cuz you don't feel the same way How will I live with myself ...

READ THE SPOILER FIRST BEFORE READING. THINGS WILL BE MORE CLEARER This is an election speech I'm making for sophomore class president. I took my name out for privacy purposes. ...

This. Was. Beautiful. I wasn't really feeling up to it when I saw the paragraphs but it was all worth it. What I think you need to look over is ...

Wow I was actually expecting a happy ending in the end of this poem while I was reading the first few stanzas but I still admire your unhappy ending. It ...

"Liam, what are you looking at?" my girlfriend, Sierra asked She looked at me with her sparkling blue eyes and her pink lips were in a pout. I kissed her ...

"Liam, what are you looking at?" my girlfriend, Sierra asked She looked at me with her sparkling blue eyes and her pink lips were in a pout. I kissed her ...

I really enjoyed the poem but it actually took me two looks to get it. Lol. What I liked about is how you express that darkness isn't something to really ...

Ummm, I really can't generate a good response for this but I will try. It wasn't really as I expected. A short story like this couldn't really attract much attention. ...

It's really well written. The dialogue is on point and you keep the reading interested. First when it comes to the flashback I think that you should make some type ...