AngelKnight900

Okay, I'm going to start with the negatives. Sorry to say but it's better. I think it's a little wordy and you didn't put much explanation in there. Also, it ...

Hehehehe, that's all I can manage to say right now. I liked it and this was like wow, in my face. What I like about it is that I was ...

Lol, this could have been your summary when you were making your book's portfolio but it's okay. But if you wanted to do a summary, you should have gotten into ...

Andre I never told Madison this, but I knew why these guys wanted her. My mom had hired this detective. His name was Detective Johnson and this guy saw all ...

The sunny day marked a new day and a new year. I woke up with a sort of confidence and I felt determined to do this mission. This was done ...

I think that it's good but that's just it. It's good but not good enough. I think that you got something here but I'm not really getting any emotion out ...

Madison Andre was confused about something. I didn't know if it was his fear of committing even though this was fake or because he wasn't trained to do this kind ...

Andre "Andre Michaels!" my mom screamed. "What in God's name are you doing?!" Madison pushed me off at my mom's voice and grabbed a nearby towel to cover herself. My ...

This was really good and you managed to get your message out of here. In a way, the message got converted when you got to the stanza that says I ...

How I hate mother nature's monthly gift. Sometimes she goes all out. She needs to realize that she gives the most crappiest gifts. -__-. Anyways, I like this because I ...

Okay, now I'm mad. I have read a lot of of good pieces lately and no matter how I try, I can't give them a good detailed review, -__- because ...

Wow, i really got to learn how not to be sooo speechless when I see a good work of literature. This was amazing and I seriously wish I could say ...

How I wish I had this dream but it never came T_T. Anyways, I liked this and I think what you said was brief and simple and it you didn't ...

This was so good that I actually read your comment on the bottom. Lol. I liked this because I could rely on it. I want to steal it and make ...

Was this like a day you felt something and just wanted to rant about it? I'm still in my early teens so most people my age I would expect to ...