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Re: Show Me The Way
Hello there! Welcome to YWS. Okay, your previous reviewer has said pretty much everything so I'm going to be the good cop here and say what was so amazing about ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Halloween on Gore Street
Well to start off, welcome to YWS as I see you're a novice. You made a mistake on the first line from Romeo and Juliet which will seriously anger ones ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: I lost my best friend today.
I remembered getting my Seventeen magazine early last month and there was a section about girls who went missing and some who just ran away and to me, it was ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Complications of Living
I loved it even though that's an understatement. What I liked most about was that it wasn't too direct. It got me thinking about the meaning of this poem and ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Semi-conscious Reasoning (3. The Love of Your Life)
OMG. That was amazing. You kept me interested until the end and it was just so interesting. You're a very talented writer and I'm so interested about the girl. Why ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Those 3 little words.......I love you <3
I like that you give us a pic of how your characters will look like so if your novel becomes a hit, I might not be so disappointed if the ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Abandoned
You have a really good idea here but I don't think you gave it your all. I think that you should have gone in more depth with your description because ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Parting of souls
I liked this. What I liked most about it was that it was brief but still impressive . It didn't drag on the meaning in the poem and it's kind ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Free Babar Ahmad
I'm just going to give a round of applause. *round of applause* Ok, now I have to review. This was unexpected because I thought it was going to be a ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Love and Running
I don't usually do photography but now I get why some of you photographers love it so much. These pictures were really good and I think that you could take ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Musing
Yeah, I would have to be given at least two years of teaching just to get what a muse is. Jk. Two weeks at least. Okay no more joking. Your ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: I Sijo
I really like this poem. What I liked about it the most was that it flowed well that it almost resembled a song. When I started reading, and I actually ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Morning Light
That was amazing. What I really liked was the way you ended it by revealing the beauty of the moth. Also, you had a sort of twist or some image ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Castle on a Hill-Chapter 1
I like this and I'm interested about your story. The only thing that I'm unsure of is the ending. I think that the chapter may have been a little too ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: First Dance
This made me cry. I loved it and I felt so bad for this guy. Did he used to have a girlfriend and he imagines being with her every night? ...
Oct 30, 2011