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Re: Marcus and Mica ch.1
Awww why does it have to be so short? :( That's the only thing I can say and I was really starting to enjoy this. Don't keep your chapters so ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Expiration Date - Prologue
This is a really good start because you managed to catch the attention of your caught my attention. I'm a little sad that it ended so quick because it was ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Clique Breaker:Chapter Four
Even though the debate team got me to meet a lot of great people, I still longed for a close friend. Marcus seemed like a good candidate but he probably ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Live Ten (Prologue & Chapter One)
Awwww I really like this story but I'm not in total love with it. :( I'm sorry but I'm not. Doesn't mean your story is bad though.......it's actually well-written. Keep ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: Shift, Chapter One
I wasn't so interested in the story until the last few paragraphs when Sherry is about to leave. In the beginning I would try to make it more interesting by ...
Jul 20, 2011 -
Re: Paper Whispers-Chapter 1
I'm not the one for really long reviews and I'm not in the mood for it right now because it's a lazy day for me today but I'm going to ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Does this darkness have a name?
Ummm.........well you need to revise this because there is a LOT of grammar/spelling mistakes. Make sure to read over your work. Now....I hate to say it but I'm not completely ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Fallen from Grace: Prologue
I could recognize the Uchiha part from Naruto but I could be wrong. I like your story and it's a great story. Too bad it ended so keep writing please ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Lust
I will say one word. BRAVO
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: The Final King Chapter One
hanks for reading this I really appreciate the response. Almost always I picture everything as if it were a movie. It works that way with almost everything I write, mostly ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Soul Reaper
Awesome beginning. I love it. Can't wait to read the second chapter. Keep writing
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: The Street Corner Symphony ch. 1
I instantly fell in love with this story. You obviously are an awesome writer and you don't have potential. No.....you're already there. There is no work to be done. No ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: The beast and the beauty
I like it but I would reread it because there's a lot of fragments or run on sentences and some spelling mistakes. Make sure to fully reread your prompts. You ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Clique Breaker: Chapter Three
I took Skye's advice and decided to join the debate team. The room where it was held resembled a college classroom that I saw in the movies.The rows of seats ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Clique Breaker:Chapter Two
Hahahaha thanks for pointing that out. I never noticed that. Thanks for the advice
Jul 18, 2011