AngelKnight900

I really like this first chapter but what I will note on is your dialogue. Your dialogue may irritate people because it might comes up as confusing because we don't ...

I was a little confused because I thought the whole thing will be narrated by Loki but I see. Is this Azrael a little kid or just a little younger ...

Omg.....I swear I reviewed this but oh well. It's hard to keep track and usually the ones I say I will follow are the ones I usually forget to follow ...

Hmmmm.....this is good but I think that with a few more improvements it could be a whole lot better. I know that she is a girl and girls have imaginative ...

Thanks....I made minor changes to the chapter.

Ooooo reminds me of the Clique series and I can feel a little bit of Gossip girl. If you're basing you story on those books, then two authors. Lisi Harrison(author ...

This actually very good but your context is a little rushed. Make sure to look it over because there are commas and periods needed in some places. I'm very interested ...

This was very well written and it caught my attention instantly. I admire your use of context and description since I'm a fan of such things. So keep writing.

Well I would comment but Twit basically said it all. I agree. When it comes to Annabelle remarking on the dress attire for girls, I wouldn't include the way of ...

I wasn't much of a party goer or a school dance attendee but today I was excited to go to the ball. I know I said that I wasn't so ...

The debate team was having it's huge competition with our rival school, Lakeway High. This school was undefeated but I still had courage in our school team. If our sport's ...

Hello there! This brought in my attention and it kept it throughout the rest of the chapter and I have also read the previous chapter. I will be following this ...

Still sad that this novel is done :/ . This is going to take a few days to get over but don't worry. I will be fine. What I really ...

Now I know how the people who watched the last Harry Potter movie felt. You should seriously get this published or something and I'll try to make sure to try ...

:'( boo-hoo. This is the second to last chapter. Like the others one, this one is amazing and I'm so curious of what's going to happen when she tells her ...