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Re: Savior: Chapter Eleven
Madison I had no idea how to react to this wedding. The big, fat, ring on my finger kept mocking me, reminding me why I was here. My hands shook ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Jealousy
i liked this. I think that you caught the true essence of jealousy and you had all the details of how jealousy feels like to a person, but-yes there's a ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: A Question For All Author's
So, we have been reading The Scarlet Letter , by Nathaniel Hawthorne in English class and I really liked it, minus the language which turned me off. I'm too used ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: The Truth About Love
I think that this poem was well written and you had me feeling your emotion in here. I like your moral that says " That you can't love a boy ...
Nov 11, 2011 -
Re: “Sanctuary”
I liked this poem and I think it's still not done. It actually reminded me of a freestyle poem when the speaker just goes on and on and on but ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: The Seaman's song.
This was really good and what I liked most was the flow it had because it actually ended up sounding like a song. The rhyming was on point and the ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Apple Cherry Pie...and other sweet things.
Hmmm, I like your story here but I'm not too sure about it. I like how you put four perspectives into this and I do agree with you that this ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Inner Beauty
"Okay Charisma, can you give me a pose that says I'm powerful?" asked the photographer I was dressed in a black leather jacket and black skinny jeans and of course, ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Inner Beauty
"Okay Charisma, can you give me a pose that says I'm powerful?" asked the photographer I was dressed in a black leather jacket and black skinny jeans and of course, ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Clique Breaker: Chapter Thirteen
I thought that I would never see Skye again but when I came over her house to plan the party with Marcus, I felt unbelievably happy. I wanted to hug ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Breast cancer awareness
I agree with your previous reviewer. I think that you should have start off with the family story which would have caught people's attention. I think that you should have ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Aster
Hmmm, I'm going to have to think about what I said so let me tell you what's coming to mind right now. I like it but I would like it ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Casualties of War
I'm not a real fan of historical fiction but I liked it. I think that your writing is good and it actually flowed well. What was also good was your ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: From Me To You
:') That was so sweet. I'm just so impressed because I wouldn't really come across a boy writing this and here I am. I agree with your first reviewer. This ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Daddys Little Girl
I am about to review....give me a moment here, okay here I go. At first I thought this was a Taylor Swift song so I automatically started making a rhythm ...
Nov 5, 2011
