AngelKnight900

Two missions. That's how it started on that very Sunday. For two missions to be completed but only one got to be operated. Now as he looked at her lying ...

To start off, welcome to YWS!!!! :D Now, YWS is a wonderful community and whatnot but one thing that I will warn you about is that there are some HARSH ...

OK. Your past reviewers already said everything. -__- So all I can say is that this was two words. AWE & SOME. I'm already very interested in your writing and ...

This is beyond interesting and I can't wait to read the following chapters. Please keep me informed about this story because I'm already in love with it. :D

I really enjoyed reading this and did see a few mistakes though. Nothing serious. Just some places where there should have been a comma or a period such as this ...

I agree with your previous reviewers. This does have potential but it has some flow issues. I struggle with the same thing. What I recommend is for you to put ...

Ok....this is actually a bit of freestyle poetry so it actually sounds better when this is read out loud because where there are huge stanzas is where I usually speed ...

Hello there. I, too, am a fellow christian and this is the second poem that I've read by you. What I will comment on is that this poem does have ...

Today was Christmas Eve and the present shook in my hands due to my anxiousness. From:Marcus To:Jay I didn't deserve this present. After the prank, all Skye wanted to do ...

I'm really enjoying following this and I can't wait to read the rest of the novel. One thing I will note though.....the speech is proper but not victorian era-ish (>:O) ...

Dammit!!! I'm second to review. *pouts* Anyways, I am a fan of your writing (as you can see since I'm following you) and this is great!!!!! That's all I will ...

I like your story but it does need to be read over. Also....I like the idea of changing the perspective but if you want both of the point of views ...

Well you certainly have impressed me once again. One thing I will note on is the dialogue because it does sound feminine and if people are reading this for the ...

Wow.....I'm unbelievably impressed. I want to know what happens next so please keep writing.

I really enjoyed this and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good job and keep writing. That's all I got to say and usually I say a lot ...