AngelKnight900

Hello there. I admire what you got here and I'm very quite impressed. Yet again, I'm a little confused. I can see that her nanna is dying and stuff but ...

Hey there. I'm proud to be the first person to post because it makes me feel special >:) hehehehe. jk jk. But I better post this fast before some other ...

Hey, welcome to YWS!!! And your lack of experience might worry me but at least you had some exposure to literature and that's good enough. With little things, we can ...

Hiroku!Hiroku!Hiroku! I think I'm going to name my child that, but welcome to YWS. I have said this to a lot of new members but I won't get tired of ...

Hmmm.....well I know you have explained everything but it may have to work a little bit more. He is three years old and an angel but yet again, he's three ...

Well everyone already said everything -__- Great :/ but this was graphic. Wow and I'm a little dissapointed at myself because I can't say much. What I will note on ...

You can't have a friend's sloppy seconds but what if they weren't so sloppy? That's what I was thinking when I read this. This story is very interesting and I ...

I don't really go by that rule. 'you can't date your friend's ex' but you can't control your feelings but back to your story. They say you can't have ur ...

Hahaha well thnx for the reviews but I actually changed this chapter completely.

Bravo! Bravo! This is really good and a great way to start a story. Usually I skip prologues, but yours are different. Good job and keep writing.

This is good but what I will disagree about is the argument present here. Sure arguments come in varieties, but in school, I don't think people will present such an ...

Hello there :D I really like this chapter but what I will comment on is that it seems to be more of a prologue than a chapter because of your ...

This is very good and I really admire your writing. Keep writing :D

Andre Love at first sight is a piece of crap. It never happens. It's just lust. I wasn't the one to really say anything about that. She was a beautiful ...

Madison A summer breeze came and kissed my face as I sat outside with my friends. They were all cuddled in their boyfriend's arms and here I was, the fifth ...