AngelKnight900

I want to write a poem for English class but I dont know what my topic should be. I was originally thinking about writing about my faith but then other ...

This was really interesting. You had actuallly grabbed my curiosity and kept it. What I liked most was that you were able to portray your characters' emotions so that the ...

It's new and I'm still trying to get used to it. I'm still somehow confused on how to use it because I haven't been on here for so long but ...

So this poem is for this Christmas party at my church and I just couldn't get the gist of it but I think this final one fits it well. Please ...

Today was not going the way I planned. Well it sort of was. The good thing was that my party left a big impact on our guests. They completely changed ...

So many good posts and here I am, as late as ever. I agree with your previous reviewers. There are a few grammatical mistakes that you made and I think ...

i disagree with your previous reviewer. If it's a true story, it doesn't really need more detail. You're just using the info you got. This story touched me and it ...

Yeah you obviously need to look this over because what really angers a lot of readers is when they read a novel with poor grammar. I will fix everything thought. ...

I like it and it was so true. What I will say is that my favorite part is the part when the person talks to their daydreams. The beginning with ...

I like it. It's simple so you're not ruining the poem by being over dramatic. Yet, even though it's simple I'm not able to generate a sort of obvious emotion ...

Tonight, I was going to my blind date. It's been a long time since I've been on a date, especially after the death of my husband Mike. The image of ...

"Josh, do you think that I'm ugly?" my sister Lia asked me . I stopped doing my homework and dropped my pencil. I looked down at the math problems, trying ...

This is actually told through two voices and this I'm thinking of presenting this story to a church. I was picked to do poetry but after making one poem, I ...

Wow this was wonderful but I do agree with your first reviewer. I was confused but it was a good confused. I liked that I could feel emotion from this ...

Lol, yah some of those band names did throw me off but it's still good. To get it more, I actually read in a slam poetic fashion and it actually ...