AngelBaby88

I never said they were beside each other

or in the morning he'll flash me that smile and fall over myself and make excuses on how stupid Iam being after all he does love me right?

Somehow finding my way from this hellish ordeal, I struggle to find my way to the top. Almost there and feeling faint, feelings of dread and life I could leave ...

are you sure your 14 and not 18...i could swear you was rather good and very umm how can i put it vivid...good job

they did warn you it was extremelly graphic and to read at your own risk..overall it was a pretty good story.

this story has potenital and i look foward to reading it. :wink:

I liked the hilary clinton one...I hate bill clinton....any one who can do something that stupid and get caught should be made fun of. :)

I agree most definitely

I'm not proud to fight but when it comes to my little sister or brother than there will be hell to pay...I can understand people not liking me but taking ...

Kyla continued stared dumbfounded. "You do not love me, it is only infatuation." She turned her back to him and proceeded to lace up the back of her dress, Tristan's ...

Its pretty good keep on working on it

WOW...I really love this story....please hurry up and continue with it...I cant wait to hear more. :D

In her room Kyla glanced at the silk dress her maid had lain her out and sighed. It was her mothers dress and she was sure her father had intentionally ...

Sorry about grammar...but you know how it is when ideas start pouring out of you and you just want to see how others feel about it because you know how ...

Thank you for your crit...and i do have problem with line youve noticed...lol...