AngelBaby88

in order to write this story i have to ask first if i can do it...its based off a game some people may not it its called finalfantasy8 and i ...

suounds pretty good....needs a few line breaks tho...keep it up.

Thrice is a great band...I myself listen to crossfade, rod zombie, Linkin Park(my fav) Shinedown, Silvertide, Nickelback, My chemical romance, Razorblade romance, Ten years, (catch my breath) thousand

Thank you 8)

The sunlight woke Tristan in the morning and he awoke to found Kyla still sleeping, she was even more beautiful in the morning sun. Tempted to caress her face he ...

why was it deleted :cry:

I agree with chanson and its very well wrote for a 15 year old.

As I woke up I felt a pain shoot up my arm and looked for its source, it was a nurse whom was poking a needle into my arm. Panicking ...

It sounds familor(lol) overall its pretty good just need a few line breaks here and there...keep it up. :wink: Jaylynn

its okay and thanks for your advice...its a work in progress and I hope everyone will like just came to me and i promise you will see some love scenes ...

HA HA I found you (lol) Didnt I already read this one. Jaylynn

Thanks :whistle:

sorry for mispelled words :|

Ive got another story that is literally pouring out of me and I have to see if Ive got something so please comment. Chapter one Your kow how people say ...

perhaps he was really was at a meeting, or was this just a voice not quite mine telling me. Could I trully believe the Voice wasnt what I thought it ...