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The poem was creative, imaginative with lovely imagery, but then the last line was weak. It was too cliche and the rest of the poem was beautifully done.

This was wonderful poetry. I really loved the 1st stanza the most. I especially loved the contrast made between fire dancing and bitter cold truth. Great poem :D

I actually liked your breath hit my skin are now bruised and your hands sprawled across my body to get your phone left burn marks I thoughtthese two parts were ...

though Should this not be through? A beautiful and imaginative piece of writing. It hadd a day dream feel to it. Very good poem!

coupe Should be cope? A Nice short poem, with a nice rhyme scheme.

I liked the sudden shocking event, it certainly shocked me as the reader! Your rhythm was off, but the way it was wriiten was good. I thought you really managed ...

I agree with Misty Lynn, the rhyming was forced and affected the rhythm, but the content was good :)

i have no clue :?

You think of this man as a traitor of the muslim faith. This is accurate. You believe that because he is a traitor to the muslim faith, he is a ...

I do not believe someone should die because they change their religion. Everyone is born into a religion, and when they grow up, i believe they should have the right ...

You fooled me. Thanks for this site, it has really improved my writing, and also encouraged me to continue writing. So thanks so much ! :D

I agree, there was some really strong imagery in this, which helped create a mood/tone for the poem

I actually thought the repition of 'Allah' was a really good idea especially this poem being a prayer. This was beautifully written, and raised awareness of current situations. This also ...

It's Mother's Day tomorrow and i want to give this poemto my mum, so any comments will be greatly appreciated. For all that you have given me For all the ...

I haven't written a story in a long time, and thought i should start writing again. My idea for a story is a romance, and a bit typical but tell ...