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The rhythm and rhyme was done really well. But apart from the first line, i didn't really see that much imagery in this. I loved the repitition of 'and this ...

thanks for all your help everyone!!!

in just three lines, some wonderful imagery was created well. good job!

2-4 was an enjoyable read, nice meanings

I need help on a piece of english work. I have to begin too write a story involving two genre's which are fantasy and comedy called 'The secret life' and ...

Not all the lines flowed well, but some did. I did not thik you had to rhyme quite as frequently as you did in this poem. My hands fell down ...

I really enjoyed the steady rhythm and the unforced rhyming. Really good poem

The alliteration was wonderfully done. All your words blended well together. Healing throughout Each word a bandage To the scarred mind of the writer This metaphor was excellent and one ...

Firstly i have to say i was a little confused at moments. But i did understand straight away that john did not come back to life, it was just in ...

typical maybe?

the emotions coveyed was wonderful and deep. i loved the imagery. Wonderful poem!

I loved the contrasts made between darkness and light, i loved the imagery used. This poem was very deep, but i also agree with xanthan gum that the ending was ...

I don't think the death penalty should be used for every crime, but only in extreme cases where someone ended up killed with no real good reason (e.g racist attack ...

When you become a celebrity, there is no escape from tabloids. The celebrity obviously has to expect it. However, i do think the tabloids do take it too far at ...

I really liked the colourful imagery, but i do think it would be better if you also included other images. Good poem though, Lovely ending! :D