Angel17

Hi Sofia i'm Mandy i'm new too. Nice to meet you :P

Hey everyone i'm new. My name is Mandy and i love so much of what i have read today!!! :P :P :P

i found it good the way you would write sentences then write one word, it makes the reader pause and think about the previous line. The end lines were a ...

Thats another fate decided by the knife[quote] This is a clever line. i prefer poems that relate to real life, because people are more able to understand and also feel ...

The poem went quickly, i think i liked because of that reason. It didn't drag on and i like the way you repeated 'If it weren't for you i'd be ...

I thought the rhyming was good. The poem might of been stronger if you didn't focus on the rhming and concentrated more on the mood of the poem. But the ...

i'm new and have not read much work but this poem really gripped me. Some of the words used was very powerful. i really liked it![/b]