Angel17

I really enjoyed reading this. It was well written, and the scene was described well. The ending was sweet. Overall, it was good reading a play, which didn't have any ...

I agree with dream deep. The rhyming was not right for the message you are trying to convey. Also i think make your poem longer. But i did like some ...

I think due to the short line lengths, the poem did not feel too long whilst reading it, in my opinion. I thought this was a lovely poem.

I fear for your safety And fret for your sanity This part was really good, and was really effective in the poem. I liked this.

I was watching the Aprentice(London), and the 2 finalists have 5 GCSE'S between them! Someone may get amazing grades in college, uni etc. But its what you do with them ...

Dear friend, You may one day be far, and we may grow apart, but you will forever be in my heart. Loving you always ~~~Mandy~~~

At 1 .0 2 am and 3 seconds today it was the 4 day of the 5 month of 200 6 . This was the only time that there would ...

I was short, but had a deeper meaning. Good poem

This had powerful imagery and a range of emotions strongly conveyed through your words. Excellet poem. I also thought the repetition of 'shattering' near the end of the poem was ...

A beautifully written poem, with stunning, vivid imagery. I loved this.

This was a good poem. It had really good detail described well. I think the last stanza was written very well especially the last few lines

This was a nicely written poem. Easy to read, but had a deeper meaning

This was really funny, and random!

I agree with Doubt, i enjoyed the detailed imagery, and i liked the sudden stop at the end. great work

The end felt a bit rushed to me. The beginning was deep and well thought out, and i thought it should of been a lot longer near the end, because ...