Angel17

I thought the poem was quite good. I agree with comments made of some parts being a little forced. However, i thought the way you created the witch with a ...

Thanks for your opinion and i have took some of your advice. :)

I am just a person walking by, Do i tell the truth or just plain lies? You have no idea what I've heard and seen You have no idea of ...

Im almost over this feeling covering me like a blanket of depair This is a really good line. I like the way you compare an emotion to an object. i ...

I thought the poem was clever. It had a lot of emotion in it. I like the way you made paper grow up with a human. I really liked it. ...

Hi welcome, i only joined yesturday, and you will love the site. :)

Excellent! it had a beat to it. I really loved the first part the most. Well done. :) :D

hi kayleigh hope you like the site. Welcome :)

Hey every one thanks for replying. I have written a poem. And i would appreciate greatly any opinions anyone may have. All critisism is welcome also. Thank you. :) :D

Don't worry I'm definitely sticking around. I love this site. Everyone is so friendly. Thank you for all your replies. i feel so welcome! xxx :) :D

My Idol Why can't i be strong like you? I look up to everything you do, The fears you fought The morals you taught The difference you've made The rules ...

Hi Bobo. i do love the site. Lots of people in this site a very talented i'm very impressed :)

Hi snoink. Thanks. I hope to read so much more on this site :P :P

hey i'm from london too. glad you like the site. i found it today and i love it :P :P

hey i'm new too. i also love this site and what people have wriiten. hope you continue liking the site