Angel17

Let everyone sing and everyone dance, while she lies in this empty, forgotten room Empty and forgotten like her. Beautiful eyes, covered by a sheet of sadness emotionless breaths being ...

Your eyes look old, Your hands are cold. You pretend to be bold As your arms slowly fold. Inside you are broken and in pain It's not long before you ...

Bloc Party- Two more years

Hi i'm quite new, i've already posted something on this forum but i just wanted to ask more people to please read my work. I want to know if i'm ...

The sun gently sets Another day has almost past. Have somehow got through, yet i still feel lost Holding on to the little bit of hope i have left Still ...

I agree with Bobo, your advice on my poems really helped, and that shows me you know what your talking about. Everyone has different views on what they like and ...

Mist and rain, May bring pain Thunder and lightning May be frightening, Sleet and frost Is when i'll feel lost, But when your here The sun is near. I'm not ...

I really love it. Some really good lines. I like the way you mentioned the title a few times throughout the piece. Good work.

illness

Why wouldn't somebody be afraid of something like that?

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Doctor

Yeah you did. And i used your advice. Thankyou :D

My name is Mandy I'm 14 years old, my birthday is nov 17th, which happens to be the same day i have to do exams! I live in London, but ...

Has a different but good avatar