Angel17

is wondering if things will change

The last line isn't as strong as the other lines. But the poems itself was okay.

This poem makes the reader think

This poem will really relate to many people. Some times i feel like i'm not going anywhere, and everything is so predictable. Anyway, your poem is good and the reader ...

It's short and simple. i really like it. it is a really strong poem with really tense moments.

Glistening stars in the sky Reflect in your glittering eyes. Your breath so warm As you hold me tight. This silent moment, with just you and me There is nowhere ...

I love the poem, the imagery in the words you wrote were beautiful. You are very talented

Nice poem. Good imagery!!

The simile used is really unique. It is a sweet poem. very good!!

That was really sad. But i liked the poem!!

Keep a distance don't get too attached, That is a rule for living. No matter where you all go Everyone will just end up hurt. Don't waste your life relying ...

I didn't think that repitition was a problem in this poem. I think it helped create a dramatic effect aswell as the emotive language you used. I liked the poem ...

it is a lovely poem with powerful imagery. Excellent work!! :)

Your poem iz really gud!!

Love is painful. Or so i've heard