Angel17

I liked this. It was short and straight to the point. She put a tear in her skin that night And a tear in her family's hearts I loved the ...

I loved your ending the most!!! Good poem :D

A memorable poem. It was good

This was great. I really liked it.

This poem was okay. It needs more imagery :D

This poem was like a fairy tale; a happy ending. I loved this, it was so imaginitive. Wrapped in black shroud of misery, Here in the dark I will stay. ...

you went outside as the rain came down left your car keys and umbrella at home like the night when you met me down by the banks of the thames ...

I liked the poem, it had a lot of imagery and was like a story. But the rhyming was a little strange. :D

I liked and understood this poem. It was quite good. I can’t feel, I can’t touch, To do these things, Is that to much? This was the only part i ...

I can't help looking at you, but when you look at me I turn away. I feel so shy when I catch your eye, But I can't help looking at ...

A lot of very strong imagery was created by this piece. Good work! :D

There was some good imagery in this. I was a bit confused at some points though. your face, a Picasso of mystery This was my favourite line, great metaphor! :D

This is a poem many can relate too. I did like this poem. good work :D

This piece needs more development. There is no real emotion in the poem. A title could be 'contolled' or 'trapped'

Your poem was really good but some words in some lines were not needed. The words in BOLD are the words i think should be taken out. There she walked ...