Angel17

I miss you when I watch you walk out the door You are the one I love and the one I adore, The warm smile on your friendly face Shows ...

This was a really sweet poem, after reading it my first thought was 'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww' !!! :)

It had no rhythm, but i liked it anyway. :)

The poem was good, but lacked imagery. Also there wasn't much rhythm. However, i loved these two parts. They were very effective. Personal… heartbreaking and joyless I’m desperate, I’m too ...

Stay with me or forever go If you leave then i don't want to know. Love me, or let me be Walk away and let me be free. Open your ...

its great

Firstly get rid of the tick on the 'Disable BBCode in this post' then your Pre button will work. I thought your poem was very good. It really makes you ...

Wonderful imagery The DOWN bit was really clever and unique. nice work

Career definitly. I want to be a Journalist in the future! And possibly write a book :D

Coldplay- Talk You can take a picture of something you see, In the future where will i be. You can climb a ladder up to the sun, Or write a ...

5!

Coldplay- X and Y

Peace

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