Angel17

That moment was so perfect I wish it never had to end. That moment we realised what we felt for each other When I knew you were more than a ...

Thanks for your feedback. But i was just wondering if you could tell me how i could make my poem have more emotion? :?

This poem had a lot of emotion in it. The poem had a voice which made more of an effect on the reader. I'm sure many could relate due to ...

thats quite sad. But i liked the poem, the questions were a good idea

DARKNESS

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Has a great signature

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Isn't there more to life than entertainment?

Hello and welcome all new YWS members, hope you enjoy the site as much as i do! PM me if anyone needs any help with anything! :D

It's hard to smile when your not here I felt relieved knowing you were always near, Everything was fine when you were around You were always the one making a ...

It sounds a bit like a nursery rhyme, its a cute poem. I really liked it.

ooooooooooooooooh great cliff hanger!

Well it was a very odd piece of writing, but i liked it. The dialect for the characters were good.

I dream of you day and night Memories of us are still shining bright. I skip from us happy to you saying goodbye. I used to dream in colour, but ...