Angel17

The poem looks simple, but your use of imagery creates a meaningful poem. Good job!

Innocence is beautiful Dishonesty is ugly. Perfection is fantasy Imperfection is human. Success is an achievement Failure is a life lesson. Ambition is determination Goals are aspirations. There is no

I have 2 older sisters, one is 26 and the other is 17. I'm the innocent younger one who is 15 lol

The poem was a strong piece which gripped me into reading straight away

I liked the detailed descriptions and the images of colour the poem had. it keeps the reader gripped also by the sounds described. Good piece of a writing.

I like it 8/10

Beautiful imagery which were strong for the reader to visualise. This was really well written. Good Job!

Thank you for all the comments and advice. More comments welcome.

A lot of people can relate to this who are heading towards important exams. You conveyed some of the feelings well in this.

Taken in by people's charm Innocent flirting, causing no harm, Until it leads to something deep Where I dream of you in my sleep. Outside beauty, inner disgust This fling ...

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It was another mind-numbingly dull day at boring, boarding school. Sitting in Maths, all I could concentrate on was the creaking walls of this new place I was in. Everyone ...

Great poetic devices used, like similies and metaphors which helped craete stunning visual imagery. Lovely poem, wonderfully written.

Can you give some morre information please, i may be interested. Thanks