Angel17

This was a very strong poem. I loved the flow of the poem. :D

Maboline babies scream while mommy sings don't you wanna be pretty? Hold your nose too high, they can't see you cry and act saditty Pretend you're better in a Prada ...

Wonderful imagery. I loved all the metaphors and similies used. A very nice poem. I thought the last lines changed the pace too much which caused the flow of the ...

A sweet and simple poem. As many previously mentioned, a poem many could relate to :D

Beautiful imagery and emotion is portrayed well. Great poem.

nice flow and good emotion in the poem :D

Red

Beak

What you are trying to get across is deep, but the way you've written the poem is very simple which makes the poem lose its effect. Overall, it was a ...

This is one of the poems i was thinking about giving in to a competition about Respect. The other one was this: RESPECT I respect you because when you tell ...

Respect is something you lack to give, If you will never respect anyone You cannot expect to get Respect For as long as you live. You believe no one else ...

Very beautiful

Look out into the world and smile Dive into great oceans worry free, Run along the never ending road for miles Feel the air upon the highest cliff and breathe ...

I can't wait for the figure skating. I love watching the snowboarding too.

I liked this because i could feel the writers emotions. Very creative and descriptive.