Angel17

Definitely continue this! The end was so unexpected which is what I love about it. The scene setting and charatcers are so vivid and described so imaginitively especially whe you ...

wow, a very powerful and insightful piece. great poem

I think this is a great poem. I love the visual descriptions as it helps convey the passion the dancers have. The rhythm is smooth and flows so well. Wonderful ...

The way you've expressed such vivid emotions means so many can relate to this piece. I love the raw honesty of the feelings described. Amazing poem

such a beautifully written and touching poem :-)

The poem flowed beautifully and the emotions were conveyed really effectively. Great Poem :-)

A beautiful poem. There is such depth and vivid imagery. The poem doesn't flow as well at some points but all in all i really love it.

Hey everyone nice to meet all u guys to :) xxx

Well i'm 16 live in London but have an indian backround. I'm just on my last GCSE exam so i'm very happy then will be going to college in september. ...

Hi i just wanted to say a HUGE hello to everyone because i haven't been on the site for soooooo long. This is mainly because i have had my major ...

I'm in London and its my final year in school doing my final exams and i'll be in college in september! Ill miss my cless though because i've been with ...

aww thanks, i can't wait to start reading everyones work and i will soon put some of my own work up too!

Well i haven't been on YWS in several months, but i hope to start writing again. I stopped writing poetry as its my GCSE year and i've had no time. ...

A nice poem. The rhyming wasn't forced and i really liked this, very effective on the reader

I like the rhythm in the poem. The imagery was nice but the ending seemed some what incomplete.