AneiDoru

I'm so surprised to see my story up there! Thanks for liking it so much! I work pretty hard on it!

I wasn't expecting someone to review my entire story, also I can't switch perspectives just yet, so I'm going to have to refuse the last edit. I'm sorry.

This story is about a girl who wakes up in a different world that she can only go to while asleep, the world is Elega and it's very high fantasy-like. ...

When I write I write topic > action with little variation and it makes me afraid that the constant monotony will scare away readers, anyone have any ideas on how ...

Work: The Light Maiden's Mark (chapters 1-3) Link: Chapter 1: Chapter 2: Chapter 3: Brief Description: Gabrielle wakes up in the world of Elega, and finds out she is powerful ...