Andie

I liked it a lot. You don't have to know Rowan's story to understand the writing, it can stand alone which is good. The best part was the description of ...

Thank you sooooo much for your reviews, I'll be sure to edit it soon!

It takes alot of guts to post your feelings for everyone to see, so kudos to you. I know I don't know you but, its easy to see that you're ...

white daisies popping up over an sapphire horizon sinking back to their origin casually with the tides The depths rock and sway to a primal rhythm A dance that has ...

I liked it. It was really natural and flowed well. I especially like that it was a military poem. kudos!

D.E. kind of reminds me of E.T. Maybe it is a sci-fi or fantasy Under the surface

Paron . . . I see either a french man who sits in outdoor cafe's and drinks his coffee with lots of sugar or one of Robin Hood's merry men ...

ha ha You know you're a writer when you analyze a conversation you had with a friend to try and make the dialogue more natural. . . and then use ...

wow, I really liked it, especially the way you used the candle and the "sliver of orange". That was great.

I really liked Song of the Sparrow by Lisa Ann Sandell. It was a period book about the Lady of Shalot who was a friend of King Aurther's. It was ...

I’ve always been comfortable with silence. I would honestly rather be quiet and observe my surroundings than waste words on empty small talk. I guess not everyone else is like ...

Hey, I liked it a lot. I liked how you added sometimes in parenthesis like it was a thought rather than something being said outloud. I also liked how you ...

I'm probably not being so helpful by saying this but, I agree with everyone else, it needs a stronger tune.Otherwise the lyrics were really good.

Hi, my name is Andie (I'm a girl by the way,just in case there was some confusion).I've been writing since . . . well since the first grade really, but ...