Andie

I have writings that I want to edit and then repost, do I need to just repost it as an edited version or can I edit the work itself? :?:

I really liked it, the idea of this girl only liking herself when she's writing was good. When my heart begins to beat Or, so it seems Was it not ...

I liked this poem, I could really see what the narrarator was talking about when they were speaking. Most of my comments have already been said in previous reviews, I ...

This is a creative writing assignment of mine. I wasn't really sure how to edit it or what to do with it. Constructive Critisism will buy you one imaginary cookie ...

Hearing the voices from his room at the back of the inn, Darius slowly slipped out of the bed and down the hall to take a peak. Would it be ...

Darius~ half breed I grimaced at the beer infront of me and then took a swig anyway. Disgusting stuff, but it did the job. When I felt someone's eyes on ...

Overall I liked it, it wasn't spectacular, but it had a nice flow and sophisticated diction. I will say that I didn't understand this line "And yet again, the Saint's ...

Would it be weird to describe this poem as poetic? It was, I thought it had a nice flow and rhythm about it. I had to read it a couple ...

music is your best friend and source of creativity. Put your ipod on shuffle, close your eyes, and when the song is over write about what you saw. Andrea Houston,Texas

It reminds me of someone seeing a cat and litteraly running, it reminds me of a HIT and run, it also reminds me of someone being katty (sp?) as in ...

thank you all for your help, I'll be sure to work on this some more!

I really liked it, It was like being in a dream. It had the same pace as a dream also, by which I mean it flows well. Good job!

All's well that ends well a revered line from Shakespeare it's very, very true. This is my favorite part, but I feel like the line "All's well that ends well" ...

Hi, can you review my poem, I really need help developing it. Thanks so much, you're doing a great job! Title: I met a girl today Genre: Dramatic poetry

boredom+bible literacy class+access to YWS= poetry. Who knew? I really need constructive criticism on this because I really liked writing this poem. Thank you! I met a girl today The ...