Andie

Pretty much every comment I have about grammer has been said, but I just wanted to say that I think you did a great job with this poem. I could ...

I really liked it and the ideas that you had about following our dreams and being alone. I did have one question as I read it. You say that "we ...

I wrote this a long time ago and just found it, pleaaaasssseee comment and tell me how to improve it. : ) On the edge of time The world fell ...

I agree with ty, I loved the poem overall and it was really easy to relate to, but the ending didn't blend. I think it's because of the "I am ...

Hi! I hope you like the poem, pleaaaasssseee critique!! I'm not sure if the transitions in this poem are as smooth as they should be. Shadowed corners Crumbled doorways My ...

I really liked this because it sounded real, not like you spent a long time thinking about diction or imagery. I especially like the part where you say love isn't ...

Hi! You said you needed help with punctuation. Well when I write poetry, sometimes I like to not use punctuation because it helps with the flow. So remember that's always ...

Well, first off you should know that I love this poem, it was very powerful. It had great imagery and emotion! Good job, especially for your first time posting. This ...

I really liked it, the it had great flow. The only thing I would change is the commas, I would put a line break behind every comma so that it ...

Oh! I missed that, thanks I'll change it right away.

It was really cute, except this part didn't rhyme Do I have a life? I think I do. I think I’d better find it soon. So the flow got a ...

This is the revised version after I considered all of your wonderful advice. I'm not sure if I should totally replace the old one though, because the original seems like ...

I like how unsympathetic the narrator is and how you get to the point. There's no fluff or pomp in this poem, which is a nice change. Very real and ...

Thank you guys! that helped me a lot

I think you should start writing with your different ideas and then see which ones pan out, you could get three pages through one and then decide that it's not ...