Andie

I'd like a link to the document because I can't attend

Fear greeted him with open arms.

I can respect your views about America's past. Every country has a sordid past, no one can name one country that doesn't have blood staining their soil. But I think ...

Is it okay to split stanzas up by threes, because when I looked the poem over I kept wanting to make them two lines long because after two lines the ...

Welcome! It's always great to have another literature lover here. : )

I thought it was great, you could also count it in with narrative poetry if you wanted too. I loved you personification of the storm and all of the imagery. ...

wow, I really liked it. It was a relatable poem but also was unique to your writing style. I don't agree with some of the comments that you need to ...

I really liked your poem and could feel the emotion behind it. Good job, I couldn't find anything wrong with it. : )

The new and towering boy in outpatient folds the lavish scaffold of himself into a smallish chair as though (good diction) it were an ongoing task to account for all ...

Wow, I thought that your story was very cool and I really like your writing style. Good job : )

I liked it, but I feel like you could lend more emotion and passion to it. It was good, I just feel like you had some strong emotions when you ...

Trust. A funny Five letter word (nice beginning) You blew mine away Like dust My world has Been held by many But by you (a little awkward) is when it ...

wow, i really liked this and I'm not going to dare to mess with it because I like it the way it is. It's so random but makes sense at ...

I liked that you personified memory. Cool idea. I do have to comment on your rhyming though. You only rhymed at the very end so it made me stop and ...

I liked the emotion in it, but the part where he said "Into a land you may not, come back to my arms." sounded strange even though I understand what ...